An amusing read, @rukkie . I'm sure you were terrified at the time, but you recount the memory with humour, and this makes for a relatable and enjoyable read. Great response to the prompt! Try to edit your future pieces using Grammarly to correct for mixed tenses and punctuation. It will elevate your story and improve the flow of your writing.
Thank you for sharing a story from your life with The Ink Well.
I really appreciate the feedback. I will work on editing my posts better.
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