Light floats by dancing, steps I cannot lead
Against the current fighting, but breath is not enough
A thousand eyes are watching, just not the two I need.
Dear my friend @tarazkp, Although I am not good at speaking English as an East Asian, I sympathized with your emotions while reading your poems!
I admired your talent as a poet for sure.😃
Perhaps you have poetically expressed the pressure and anxiety that you must succeed!
A stranger who can't be Finnish after all @tarazkp !
I don't think it is about success in this poem, but it is in the eyes of the beholder :)