Ade was not expecting things to go as it planned in the classroom as being the only son of his father, he has always had this mindset of being pampered by his father and generally his parents. Though he lost his mother at a very tender age and so it makes him not only the only son but also the only child of the family of ADENIJI. Ade is the only son of the family of Mr and Mrs Adeniji and which Ade father is a popular name among the city because he is the owner of a big manufacturing cement industry in that very town.
The Lord gave Mr Adeniji the fame and popularity through that business as his cement quality was one of the top among the list of the cement manufacturers and so this helps him to grow his reputation. This is not only that in turn bringing in the riches that are long deserved in the family. Ade was sponsored to go to one of the best schools in the society and been known as the only son of Mr Adeniji, he grew up with that sense of pride and was spoilt. But well we can't actually blame him, that is how his father raised him. He was raised to be spoilt and over pampered and thereby affected Ade Morals and character wise
Entering the boarding school, of course due to the reputation his father has accumulated, he actually wants to be associated with a lot of students all around thereby making him more pompous. This allows him to do things outside the school rules and still get away with it as other students who might have done the same or similar thing and exposes to several punishments. He became known to be the bully of the school and often tagged as the rich boy all around the school. Every student was afraid of him but actually what can they do knowing fully well his status in the society and the fact that been the only child of Mr Adeniji, gives him more of this thing more and more.
There is this gentle boy in the same school Ade was which was also in fact in the same class that Ade was. His name is Michael. Well Michael is known to have this polite and humble personality to many people around him making him to be known to be charming all around everyone in the school. Well we can't actually blame Michael, he grows up from a humble background which he was exposed to rigorous home training and not only that but also helps because he is not the only child as Ade was. Micheal grow up among 5 siblings, he is the third and have two younger sisters and two elders brothers. Michael was exposed to more home training I will conclude much more than Ade and this helps shape his personality.
Ade because people love Micheal much more than him begins to see Micheal as a threat and then trying every means to get him inplicated in the school so that he can be more respected. Well on this faithful day when they were preparing for an exam, Ade made up with mind with his fellow gangs or should i say his group of friends to actually implicate Micheal in Examination Malpractice in order to get him in soup and get him out of the school.
Well they actually came up with a plan of placing answers written in a sheet of paper inside Michael locker before the exam so that during the exam and when there is a general check up going on, Micheal will be caught and due to examination malpractice, it will actually affect Micheal and this will make him to be rusticated from the school and their goals will be achieved. The mistake they made was the fact that Ade wrote those answers with his handwriting. They eventually placed those things in the locker of Ade and finally it began to set out as expected.
When the examination was going on and the lockers of several students were going on, Ade was caught surprised when he saw those answer sheets in his own lockers and not in Micheal lockers. Wondering how possible, he was unaware that while they were planning those things, Micheal was seeing them and immediately they placed it in Micheal locker, Micheal found a conducive time to actually place the answer sheet to Ade locker when he was not in the class unknown to Ade. Ade was filed with examination malpractice.
At the end of the day, Ade was rusticated from the school as that is the golden policy for anyone to find in examination malpractice. At the end of the day for Ade, he have a taste of his own medicine.
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Greetings, @precab. Ade really hatched a plot that ended up parjudicating him. A little more work on the mindset of the characters and the use of story elements can go a long way to improving your writing and thus your rewards. Here's a tip for you: Consider adding some dialogue between your characters, as well as some action.
These are two important elements of quality fiction that can bring a story to life. You have done a very nice job with the narrative, but it would be even better if you told some of the story in action, and added dialogue so the characters speak to each other. Here are a few resources for you:
Hmmmm! I guess it's true what they say that the evil that men do certainly lives with them. Ade plotted the downfall of innocent Micheal but he got the taste of his own medicine eventually.
Thank you for this insightful story. Ade surely deserved the charge and maybe the rustication from school. A little tip though, the use of 'well' was numerous for the script and a little description may perhaps tilt the script to be nonfiction rather than otherwise.
Thank you for the good script delivered
Ade's plan backfired all thanks to Michael's smartness. Jealousy is a bad thing.
Well Ade got what he deserved.