For this week's entry, I decided to perform a song that is dear to me and one that has traveled with me through many years of my music journey. The original composition, "Platinum Frame" is a song about heartbreak, and about letting go.
Lyrics:
Bleeding eyes pool a muddy pond at my toes
If I tossed up a dream to the moon, would your heart know where it goes
Sometimes I find myself fading in and out of consciousness
Memories of a summer day before your name became only a dream
Only a dream
You can choose to listen to what everyone else says
Or you can lay your pain to rest
Everyone's got to find their own ways of letting go
If I could take you and paint you up on my walls,
I'd build a platinum frame, just to hold it all
Glimmering candlelight, the spark in your eyes,
Just the matchstick i used to set myself ablaze
Drowning in kerosine, little did I know,
you wouldn't be there to put me out
Faded scenes still caress the back of my mind,
A failed design
Emergence from the shadows of my own regret,
no longer standing here, my table's more than set
Wishing now for a time delay, erasing words I've heard you say, sounds like a cassette tape on repeat
[Chorus]
@fondew
This original song is straight fire
Leaving a trailblaze of temperatures higher
That outlines the marks of heartbreak
When we get tangled in emotions of relationships, in that we partake
Your voice both smooth and driven with raw emotion
Powerful moments, and relatable notions
Listeners wanting to scream and yell along with you
To express and release what they suppressed, their issues
This paved a path and an experience to the inner soul
To reminisce, step & drift, what we've wept & missed, bigger woes
Holding on to all the baggage, after being damaged & ravaged
Relationships, some toxic & savage, we need to let go, what we no longer can salvage...
-@Verbal-D Official Vibes Judge
Wow Verbal, thank you so much. Truly appreciate such thorough feedback.
Beautiful lyrics! Your song truly captures the pain of heartbreak and the struggle to let go.
Your entry is amazing....I wish you good luck in the competition.
Thanks Jessica! I appreciate it. This song definitely has a forever place in my journey.
It's so beautiful
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What an inspiring song ..and trust me you deliver it well and sooth ...nice lyrics
Thank you eyes! I appreciate you.
Your welcome 💪💯
Your welcome bro ..if your a lover of rap music .I do more of rap and I have my entry for the week ...Bless up
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Amamzing song bro.
Thank you so much isabel!
man you're to good. i'm gettin that you do this for a living correct?
Haha I appreciate that, and yea sorta. I took 6 years off after playing with multiple bands for like 12 years, been back to it over the last year and a half. Im still working on getting back to a regular live schedule. TBH I didnt really get a ton of attention as an artist until the last year or so
Yo have something really good goin' on, dont let it go. i'm barely starting on my country and nobody knows me jajaja. now that u got some attention make the best of it. u better bet i will. Greetings man. it's always nice to listen to your entries
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This is so lovely and I admire how you could play the guitar anytime you play.
Thanks so much! Just lots of years of pushing through the suck lol. Its really only been in the last year or so that I really have fallen into my pocket.
Awesome