A worthy attempt and I condone much of the result as well. It was an intriguing project to work with you on and impressive what you made of it. There are many details that are highly technical and I would assume could be better understood by myself. There are also some that I probably would have avoided, but it truly is tricky thing to express the very fundamental grounds for and of jurisdiction.
In short, well done. I hope to discuss this further with you in the near future.