Bet You Didn't Expect That! A ZapFic 250-Word MicroFiction Story | Based on @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2089 | Prompt: standing naked in the arena (desnudo en la arena) [Eng/Esp]

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MicroFiction: A 250 word story written using the word prompt "standing naked in the arena".

...What can I say about the prompt for today, "standing naked in the arena." The words speak for themselves. The word "naked" can take on several meanings. One can allude to another person being unprepared or inexperienced. I share a micro fiction story with my interpretation of the prompt in the form of a ZAPFIC 250. This story format is told in exactly 250 words.

For my theme, I was inspired by and utilized the @daily.prompt's publishing of @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2089: standing naked in the arena.

Below is my story:

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The work day came to an end on a high note for the sales group. To celebrate their success, team leader, Josh, scheduled a meeting to announced an after-hour social. It wasn't everyday that a member of their team announced an engagement. All team members agreed to meet at a local club.

Josh cast a furtive glance at Joanne who suppressed a laugh. They both eyed Benny, the youngest and newest in their team.

New in town, she offered to drive. New in town, he quickly accepted, not yet familiar with the city's layout.

They arrived first. Inside, the Ladies' Night sign glowed neon as they quickly entered.

Benny admired the abstract decor, but failed to notice the sign.

Crowded with the aroma of ale and cigarettes in the atmosphere that was less than desirable, they located a booth, then ordered drinks.

Where were all the men? Not wanting to expose the fact that he'd never been to such an event, Benny swallowed huge gulps of the cocktail.

New to this entertainment feature and unattached emotionally, his pulse quickened waiting for a chance to introduce himself.

Half an hour later, Benny leaned over. "Where's the rest of the team?"

"They'll be along shortly." Joanne turned and clapped loudly as balloons rose up.

Exotic music erupted. Several men burst onto the stage, standing naked in the arena.

"Bet you didn't expect that!" Joanne shouted.

Although in costume, Benny jumped up and sifted his way through the crowd, headed for the exit.

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Microficción: Relato de 250 palabras escrito a partir de la palabra "desnudo en la arena".

...Qué puedo decir sobre el tema de hoy: "Desnudos en la arena". Las palabras hablan por sí solas. La palabra "desnudo" puede tener varios significados. Puede aludir a la falta de preparación o experiencia de otra persona. Comparto un microrrelato de ficción con mi interpretación del prompt en forma de ZAPFIC 250. Este formato de relato se cuenta exactamente en 250 palabras.

Para mi tema, me inspiré y utilicé la publicación de @daily.prompt de @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2089: standing naked in the arena.

A continuación mi historia.

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Apuesto a que no te lo esperabas

La jornada laboral terminó con una nota alta para el grupo de ventas. Para celebrar su éxito, el jefe de equipo, Josh, programó una reunión para anunciar una fiesta después de hora. No todos los días un miembro del equipo anuncia un compromiso. Todos los miembros del equipo acordaron reunirse en un club local.

Josh lanzó una mirada furtiva a Joanne, que reprimió una carcajada. Ambos miraron a Benny, la más joven y nueva del equipo.

Ella, nueva en la ciudad, se ofreció a llevarle. Nuevo en la ciudad, aceptó rápidamente, aún no familiarizado con el trazado de la ciudad.

Llegaron los primeros. En el interior, el cartel de Ladies' Night brillaba con neón cuando entraron rápidamente.

Benny admiró la decoración abstracta, pero no reparó en el letrero.

Abarrotadas por el aroma a cerveza y cigarrillos en un ambiente poco deseable, localizaron un reservado y pidieron bebidas.

¿Dónde estaban todos los hombres? Como no quería exponer el hecho de que nunca había estado en un evento así, Benny tragó grandes tragos del cóctel.

Nuevo en esta función de entretenimiento y desvinculado emocionalmente, se le aceleró el pulso esperando una oportunidad para presentarse.

Media hora después, Benny se inclinó hacia él. "¿Dónde está el resto del equipo?".

"Llegarán enseguida". Joanne se giró y aplaudió con fuerza mientras se elevaban los globos.

Estalló una música exótica. Varios hombres irrumpieron en el escenario, de pie y desnudos en la arena.

"¡Apuesto a que no te lo esperabas!" gritó Joanne.

Aunque iba disfrazado, Benny saltó y se abrió paso entre la multitud, dirigiéndose a la salida.

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The screenshot at WORDCOUNTER.net evidences my use of exactly 250 words to create my ZapFic100.

La captura de pantalla en WORDCOUNTER.net evidencia mi uso de exactamente 100 palabras para crear mi ZapFic100.

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Good luck everyone with whatever your endeavors.

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English is my native language.
If translation included, I use DeepL to assist my readers.
Thanks for your patience an understanding
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El inglés es mi lengua materna.
Si se incluye traducción, utilizo DeepL para ayudar a mis lectores.
Gracias por su paciencia y comprensión.

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Poor Benny! 😄 He certainly wasn't expecting that unexpected twist at the end. I enjoyed the blend of humour and surprise at the end. Your vivid descriptions of the club's atmosphere puts your readers right on the scene.

Delightful! Well done. Take care and have a wonderful weekend. 😊 !PIMP


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Well, THAT was a surprise!

He wasnt expecting that!!

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