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ntul001 (62)in The Ink Well • 4 months ago
RE: Fraud
Hmmmmmm. The shock was indeed great in Mary.. And her ability to communicate shows how she can handle matters. It's indeed a nice story
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theinkwell (73)in The Ink Well • 4 months ago
RE: Fraud
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theinkwell (73)in The Ink Well • 4 months ago
RE: Fraud
This story has potential but we need more foreshadowing. We need little clues along the way that we can look back on at the reveal and go... Aah!!! That surprised me, but it…
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pretemi (64)in The Ink Well • 4 months ago
RE: Fraud
Mary really went through a lot but thank God the culprit was apprehended to face the law
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oyebolu (60)in The Ink Well • 4 months ago
RE: Garden hostage.
Yes, thank you for reading through and commenting.
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demmybabs (52)in The Ink Well • 5 months ago
RE: RECKLESS GAME
It was my first experience with such fraud. I wished he came back so I can tell him a piece of my mind
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farahikram (61)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: When the past comes hunting
Your story truly proves that what we do comes to us when karma hits us back. She mistreated the little girl and her son suffered because of it.
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lareaiyela (56)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: Creative Nonfiction Prompt #141
Commented
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lareaiyela (56)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: When the past comes hunting
This is heartbroken. And also a true life activity. Thank you so much how you brings it up
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venom2951 (57)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: Karma's good side
Yeah
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offia66 (72)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: Out of the bag
No relationship should be built on secrecy, once that secret is out the relationship comes crashing down. Thanks for sharing this master piece.
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delightedpen (61)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: When the past comes hunting
If only Mrs Okon had treated Stella right. If only! I can bet that her son, David, would not have gone through the hell he went through in the hand of her friend.
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ima99 (60)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: When the past comes hunting
This story really breaks my heart. But in the real world, there are also many people who treat others arbitrarily.
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marriot5464 (68)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: Papa's Silence
Yeah. Although, at times it isn't usually easy.
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oyebolu (60)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: Out of the bag
It happens if the relationship is built on secrecy. Sudden truth may not be comprehensible. Good one from that perspective.
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coolbabe88 (65)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: Out of the bag
What she did was totally wrong, why would she hid from him that she has a child. Who won't feel bad, if it's me I will cut ties with that brother of mine
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ubani (67)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: Out of the bag
That's one thing with inanimate objects like telephone, they don't have any sense of their own, they don't see what's happening around. Theirs is to respond to what's already…
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cyberking25 (51)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: Out of the bag
The emotional depth of the story is amazing I enjoyed it
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almadepoeta (64)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: Out of the bag
I like the atmosphere created in the story; it really helps to stay connected to the events. Blessings, and a beautiful story!
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marriot5464 (68)in The Ink Well • 6 months ago
RE: Out of the bag
Was she cheating on the husband with the so-called brother? If that was what happened then that's bad. Too bad of her.
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