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hivebuzz (74)in #poetry • 2 years ago
RE: clocks
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joseitosanchezs (66)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: In light
Deep and beautiful poem, the memories that we have left of what we have lived on this earthly plane, very cool image I love it, greetings ☺
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teknon (71)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: In light
into the future my love, our shared destiny. I really can't tell if this line is of joy of sadness but relating it to myself, following the past tense "seen", I'd say it's the…
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beaescribe (67)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: '23
"running along an infinite corridor". What a strong image, what a moment. It seem a nightmare or a kind of virtual play, a multiverse. I like your poem, anyway. Have poweful images.
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thayeblohangen (60)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: '23
Years passed, the journey is still long, in search, find, search, improve, towards perfection, @thecreativecasa
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thayeblohangen (60)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: The Sixth Original Poetry: The Poet's Silence
Stunning, indeed, @thecreativecasa. We have an inner voice that is our own best friend. When we observe people, and we know answers to their behavior, which are sometimes not…
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thecreativecasa (46)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: Calpa
Hi todayslight, thank you for your comment. I try and write from where I am emotionally. I chose to use the haiku, tanka format because that is a little tricky and aids brevity…
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todayslight (63)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: Calpa
Cool, I hope you keep this up, it’s such a joy to write from the heart, I find it like automatic writing when writing a song or poem, I never know where it’ll take me.
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teknon (71)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: The Ship Worker's Anxiety
Thank you 😊
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thecreativecasa (46)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: The Lock
Stuart - thank you so much for your comment. Three haiku and a couplet. My attempt at brevity.
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stuartcturnbull (65)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: The Lock
what a tremendously powerful poem. there is a sense of brooding, pent, emotion which may or may not be about to explode.
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teknon (71)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: The Ship Worker's Anxiety
Is the image an art or a real image? Just curious cause it's beautiful. Nice poem BTW
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hivebuzz (74)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: The Ship Worker's Anxiety
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thecreativecasa (46)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: '23
Hi Mell79 and thanks for your comment. Yes it's a bit like hanging or ticking like a clock? It's two tanka verses. I used that structure to help with the brevity of the theme…
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mell79 (65)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago
RE: '23
This poem is like hanging. without end. It is also like a bunch of feelings that you are trying to highlight. I hope you have some explanation for your poem.
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schoolofminnows (-9)(1)in Blockchain Poets • 3 years ago
RE: Bile
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joseitosanchezs (66)in Blockchain Poets • 3 years ago
RE: Aeon Dissension
I really loved your poem, very cool narrative as you mention the sun as yolk very interesting and cool, greetings ☺
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agreste (65)in Blockchain Poets • 3 years ago
RE: Aeon Dissension
Ah, yes, it's clear to me now! I didn't get it at first. Very interesting. And, again, excellent poem.
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agreste (65)in Blockchain Poets • 3 years ago
RE: Aeon Dissension
Great poem, so many symbols and images. Does the chart indicate other orders in which the poem can be read? I am confused by the fact that the poem has seven stanzas, but the chart mentions only six.
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joseitosanchezs (66)in Blockchain Poets • 4 years ago
RE: Noumenon
I agree with you, I wish there was a reset button, we depend so much on technology nowadays. In my country we have a very common saying, remember when we were happy and didn't…
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