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RE: ADSactly Short Story - A Ray of Sunshine

in #adsactly6 years ago

@greenrun and @adsactly, Literally i want to say that it was great, emotional and surprising story, firstly it started with the detectives and while reading, it reflected as they are entering for an Investigation.

But then really an Emotional driven incident and that part is really painful because we cannot imagine that kind of pain. And in that kind of situations many face the Emotional breakdown and many people faint.

But, i want to say that ending phase was really surprising and took an dramatic path and Son met with her mother after years who was thought as dead after birth.

Keep writing and it reflects as you have great imagination and you also hold the writing skills which can push people from one state of phase to next.

Wishing you an great day and stay blessed. 🙂

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