I agree regarding paragraphs and headers! @jhimmel did you copy and paste this post in a way that deleted paragraphs?
Anyways, in more traditional formats, paragraphs tended to be longer... maybe 8-10 sentences. However, for online content like blogs and Steem posts, short is better. No shame in a 2 sentence paragraph here. I'd say 3 is the ideal, but obviously let the content dictate the breaks, not vice versa.
Glad that was received the way it was intended. Really hate dropping into someone's post and giving advice, but the content was solid and without proper presentation it's hard to keep people reading. Want to see people succeed here!
Haha. FYI @jhimmel ≠ @dhimmel (but we're brothers).
Sorry about that...your steemit names are so close and I was rushing.