Hello I notice that you are new to steemit, so welcome. Firstly well done on writing a science post, it's excellent to see science enthusiasts.
Just some feed back to help you. I think the formatting needs some adjustment, at first sight the second half of the article looks like it has been copied and pasted. This is not something that is appreciated on steemit, so i suggest in the future to design a nice layout of your posts, and make sure that nothing is copied and pasted from another source.
thanks, I still need to learn to, I just joined a few days ago, and I apologize