I like the wooden carving best, 3rd pic down. Checking on you bro, looking good. Resteemed this to share downline.
I enjoyed the reading, and must remark on your verbal picture painting as well. My HS honor's English teachers would have aced you in creative writing... but I bet your's already did.
Keep it up man, in no time, you'll be a rock star here.
Thank you!! Your comments are always the most encouraging. The wooden carving is also one of my favourites.
To be honest for the majority of my schooling I didn't do well in creative writing at all but if you say my writing is good, I'll take your word for it.
Your writing is fantastic man, I actually only spotted one error in the whole thing, and as a former English major (dropout) I tend to notice them. You missed a single comma in the whole piece. And that could merely have been a typo.
Excellent work. Again, the mark of a good writer is painting pictures with words and I saw you park your car and leave it in my head. I felt your feelings about the shabby parking location and could relate from parking in big cities myself, in sketchy locations.
THAT is the goal, and you nailed it.