I Just Sent This Poem to this Girl The Other Day - Will She Like It?

in #art8 years ago

I don't usually write poems. I have never written a poem. But I met a girl that inspired me to write one...
And I gave it to her without asking for feedback...I just handed her the piece of paper and left...
Will she like it?

A flower blossoms and will one day wither
A star shines in the sky and will one day disappear
A man's life, compared to that of a star, is but an instant
And a star's life to a man is an eternity
Your smile is as bright and radiant as the stars themselves
And while it lasts an instant
It feels like an eternity...

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