Wow, I am so glad I didn't read any of the other entries before I submitted my own! It would have effected the way I wanted to do mine for sure! This (yours) is a really well written, fully thought out story line with elements that were super imaginative! You are obviously familiar with the dystopian theme, yet prove yourself able to re imagine it in your own unique way! I felt like I was in the story while reading it! Awesome job @zoeyartanddesign.
Thank you for your awesome comment @erinn! I very much enjoyed reading your story as well :)
I'm glad you like my story so much, especially since this is my first time writing a full story like this!