Very well done! You managed quite a cast of characters in this piece, @nobyeni. And you did it masterfully, along with portraying all the forces at work. I like @negativer's lasagna analogy. So true. There are many layers!
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Thanks Jayna! I was considering writing more stories as a follow-up on this one, to take the different characters that emerged here to give them some room to grow as well :)
I might still do that, who knows :)
Excellent idea! I love it when that happens!