I could almost see your character walking down the street...but I get an overwhelming feeling of loneliness...in this world there's barely any need to interact with other people. I find this very disturbing. (please keep writing, it was a very good read!)
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Thank you @ladyrebecca! I appreciate your feedback. Yes, you are right. I am still at the individual life stage... so it does feel overwhelmingly lonely. Each person seems to be in a world of their own, right? In my next installment, I'll bring the society together and see where it takes us. :) Thanks again for your feedback and encouraging words.