While most of the time you are doing very good videos and honest to earth here on your steemit, you forced it a little bit too much like an infomertial on that first video and it looks like all those many other scams you see on the internet.
don't over act it, don't try to push words so much outside with these over exagerrated body langage moves that , i know, are made to pulse and bear your words with a dynamic and visual feel, you already do it on your videos on steemit but it is way less "obvious" and subtle, you should keep that approach, i mean, the very down to earth and honest advice kind of videos you are already making on steemit.
It was a little bit over the top when i really love your other videos here, you don't need to force your words into people's screen as much as you have done it in the facebook ad. (because it's an overdone marketting ploy and really feel unnatural when pushed too much, disconnected.)
I hope this critique can help you for future videos ^^