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RE: To bot or not to bot, potentials, dangers, and a future uncertain (post may offend some people) + $50 horror writing story contest

in #busy6 years ago

The bus lost break while on a high speed and most occupants screamed as if that's the solution. As the bus approached a busy junction still out of control, the driver smartly turned off the engine and that made the vehicle to gradually slow down and no one was injured.

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Nah, its not scary enough, it should hav ended thus:

as the engine roar died and the bus slowed down, the bus occupants breathed. Signs of relief, the distinct sound of honks blared in the distance, as if impatient drivers had no care for their predicament but as they looked out, their last sight was of the train name and number "hellblazer101"