Hello there!
I'm very keen on following the use-a-thon, and it's great to see some of the ideas proposed. We, at Utopian, are great supporters of this project and of the use-a-thon itself.
I do have some issues with the post itself, some mild corrections that could make a good post awesome. Let's get into it.
"Even though the contest is still in its early stages there are already seven participants who have joined the race to claim the total of 22 GBYTEs in prize money." This is a super long sentence, unbroken by any comma. Plus, the wording "there are already seven" is a bit clunky. Proposed edit: "Even though the contest is still in its early stages, seven participants have already joined the race to claim the total of 22 GBYTEs in prize money."
"preferably in a way allowing" would be better as "preferably in a way that allows"
"@grow-pro along with his partner @Jackmiller have already proven their use case is sustainable and has real-world application by providing a Bytes-Steem exchange service reducing much of the hassle for users when exchanging between the two assets." This, again, is a super long sentence with no commas. I would break it up. For instance: "@grow-pro, along with his partner @Jackmiller, have already proven their use case is sustainable and has real-world application: They provided a Bytes-Steem exchange service, reducing much of the hassle for users when exchanging between the two assets."
These are not huge issues. This is a good post, which I was happy to read. I make these comments in the spirit of constantly striving for better.
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Thanks for the excellent points. Not being a native english speaker myself, i had one of the other jurors read it through and correct errors. He's a former teacher from the UK.
The points you made are definitely relevant though, so I'll pass it on to him ;-)
How nice
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