Working Outline to generate William Chacon's First Content Draft

in #canada β€’ 6 years ago (edited)


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Client: https://www.linkedin.com/in/wchacond
Location: Montreal, Ontario, Canada 🍁
Industry: Residential Construction, Commercial Real Estate, EPCM
https://developer.linkedin.com/docs/reference/industry-codes

The following corrections must be made, since I plan to activate the 3 foundation modules at once. This means as soon as we start correcting /modifying /improving your LinkedIn Profile you will start improving Engine Positioning, Indexability, and Visibility which will impact your Search Appearances, Profile Visits, Interaction Potential, and lay the ground for connecting.

Your current LinkedIn Profile is really a Marketing Tool. Hence it must have solid content, even of better quality than your CV. Eventually a Single Content Document πŸ“„ Draft will emerge which you will be use for improving your old CV Resume, the Profile itself, and for Career Centers Profile upload as well as Public Online Job Portals.

Preliminary Findings at LinkedIn Profile Level:

  1. Contact Information missing action drivers: email πŸ“§, phone & Skype
  2. At accomplishments level there is one course in Spanish. Need to translated into English
  3. I feel Spanish names of companies must be translated in those cases where applicable since no one in the Canadian Market will be using Spanish Keywords
  4. We need to improve on the preliminary Summary as fast as I can, piecewise converging to final one.
  5. Headline need to be change at once. I will be making proposals. A headline is limited to 120 characters as per https://www.lettercount.com

This Document πŸ“„ will become uneditable after 7 days since it is being written in stone blockchain Steem/SBD

William, it would be a very good idea that you created and use a Steemit.com account for this Project

Since we could use the post as Public Chat and early Marketing Exposure. It all depends on you if you are used to write πŸ“. Since steemit.com take 2 weeks in creating accounts, I could create your steemit.com account and have temporary control of your Private Keys. May be you end up liking steemit.com - The Cost of Steemit.com account for your Job Search Project will be covered by me.

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    Β 6 years agoΒ Β 

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    Β 6 years agoΒ Β 

    Another mistake is fracturing the Summay in several paragraphs when they belong to one section. Here I am talking about what you call Profile & Skills

    Also yo list Skills like copying them from LinkedIn Profile without further development.

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    Β 6 years agoΒ Β 

    Achievements belong to each Job held in the past, unless there are some truly impacting your presentation

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    Β 6 years agoΒ (edited)Β 

    Plan your Resume just for 2 pages πŸ“„ πŸ“„ rather than current three. There is a lot of wasted space as you are using 2 Column Format. You should eliminate that doble column. But do not make any changes until I give you my Draft Version V1.

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    Β 6 years agoΒ Β 

    Other activities as well as apprenticeship are irrelevant to the presentation, since they are not related in any way to your main career path.

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    Β 6 years agoΒ Β 

    I consider that the Starbucks experience is important, at the end is Canadian experience, one reference that can be validated. From past experience that other friends had it is important to say that you have any experience in the Canadian market.

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      Β 6 years agoΒ Β 

      Name of Word.doc File must be William Chacon and - Residential Construction Project Coordinator. You should start marketing right from even the moment someone is downloading your resume

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      Β 6 years agoΒ Β 

      At Level of CV change objective for Summary to align it with the LinkedIn Profile Structure

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      Β 6 years agoΒ Β 

      The wrong way of structuring and formating the white space of the pages πŸ“„ has an incredible impact on revision, processing and ATS Applications. Your CV is clear example of this techniques. Usually the problem is created by the Candidate to attempt to create Doble column presentation

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      Β 6 years agoΒ Β 

      Summary

      9+ years experience in Residential Construction, Office Remodeling & HVAC industries as Project Coordinator/Manager. Strong negotiation skills, ....

      Much better than

      "To leverage my 9+ years experience in management, negotiation skills, and expertise in the construction and HVAC industry onto a Construction Management team."

      But still needs further development

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