So I'm not a fan of this layout.
It seems very disjointed and while thatdoes have its place in storytelling, it's not as a standalone piece (unless you're in 1970's America. lots of drugs caused that phenomenon, and most agree that very little of note was produced.)
Your Sig at the bottom was just a touch too much for me. I think it was the steemitboard achievement pic that made it too long, but the extra gifs made it a bit too tacky (like an oldschool geocities or angelfire page). Pick tacky or long, but both feels weird.
This is honest criticism, because that's literally what you asked for at the beginning of the post.
I was thinking the exact same thing, to be honest. Thanks. Except for the statment you made about 1970's America. I think my writing is more 1950's and 60's and you would be foolish to suggest no great writing came out of that era.
Sorry I was unclear. Reading words is like having a movie play in my head. I get visuals and audio with it. So it wasn't the books from the 70's, but the movies of the 70's I was envisioning. Like Wizards but very... broken.
Ok. Well the post you just read was me taking my old content and reworking into this style. This post is the exact same style except the post was created specifically for Steemit. How do you think it plays in that post?