there was so much more to this sketch actually... but i felt it really held back the pacing...so i got ruthless with cutting. after the first edit is was at 7 minutes. so tricky to get it to under 5. i wanted so bad to keep the pacing while not losing that feeling of when you lend someone money and they fail to return it and then somehow the guilt gets transferred to the person who just wants there money back.
That is a tough subject matter to pace. I thought you did a good job with it. Pacing is more important then a lot of people realize. I struggle with it all the time. I'm always cutting a lot out as well.
there was so much more to this sketch actually... but i felt it really held back the pacing...so i got ruthless with cutting. after the first edit is was at 7 minutes. so tricky to get it to under 5. i wanted so bad to keep the pacing while not losing that feeling of when you lend someone money and they fail to return it and then somehow the guilt gets transferred to the person who just wants there money back.
That is a tough subject matter to pace. I thought you did a good job with it. Pacing is more important then a lot of people realize. I struggle with it all the time. I'm always cutting a lot out as well.