You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: MSP Fiction Workshop 50-Word Challenge: STORY STARTER

in #contest7 years ago

ENTRY

George swung the edge of his Quasar 470 deluxe metal detector gently where he had seen the group of beach goers had been sitting. He awaited the cheerful ping of a pound coin inches in the sand. Maybe two if he was lucky. The needle bounced across hard and screeched,