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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #23: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SBD prize pool!

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Isabel's blood on the pavement.

It was a summer night, when Edison decides to walk the streets of the neighborhood. Suddenly! He hears screams around him and when he realizes it is a young woman lying on the pavement. He runs quickly to see what happened to him and he loads it to the front of his home. The young woman was bleeding "Like a sky red with blood". Confused by not knowing what was wrong, the young girl wakes up and asks for help with a trembling voice. He had fainted, hitting the road and that was why he had those blows on his head. In an Angel Edison had become without him knowing. He goes to the hospital with the young woman named Isabel and manages to save her from the dangers of the night.
Edison's air had become another anecdote knowing the love of his life. Isabel in honor of having "saved his life" Edison invited him to eat.

As time passed, they decided to give themselves the opportunity to get to know each other and start a relationship. Isabel gets pregnant and they get tired living a red night of passion in the midst of circumstances rising from the ashes. Edison's confidence recovered her with her new red love.