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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #30: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SB prize pool!

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ADVENTURE IN WONDERLAND.

Frank, a boy who was invited to the country of wonders. The invitation said "Do not carry much, not even what is necessary". He did not understand the message and looked for his best jeans, shoes, flannels, video games, among other things.

The next day the transport arrived and Juan left; the boys see him imagine it was his first time because he was the only one who carried a lot of luggage. Juan realized that it was not another country, he had not even left his. The place full of trees and a large field. Near his whereabouts was a ravine and the weather was perfect.

No shoes to enjoy the sand, run freely and eat fruit from the trees. The rain attacked the place, they took off their shirts and went to play soccer in the field. When it stopped raining they went to the stream to bathe, it was dark and they were ready to see the full moon while eating fish. Juan, lying down, thought about the invitation. "Do not carry too much, here the necessary remains". Understanding the meaning the material is nothing compared to the wonders of nature. Do not use anything.