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RE: VDux Haiku Contest - Now Open!

in #contest • 8 years ago (edited)

Hi @vdux - Here is my entry for this contest, its one I previously posted!


SOURCE:

https://steemit.com/haiku/@rlt47/an-original-haiku-hurricane

HURRICANE:

Objects fly fast - duck!
Bends big tree right over - crack!
Rips roof right off - Fast!


https://goo.gl/images/mXbkyB

An Original Haiku - All Rights Reserved

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     8 years ago  

    Excellent use of visual aids. Middle sentence has 8 syllables -- can you cut one syllable?

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     8 years ago (edited) 

    @vdux - This is becoming quite a habit! I never thought I'd say this - but I will be petitioning Microsoft for a syllable counter...

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      Nah, if they did they'd bury it under six layers of menu options. Good fix!