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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #30: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SB prize pool!

in #contest6 years ago

ADVENTURE IN WONDERLAND.
One sunny morning Julia and John, were in the mansion of their maternal grandfather, were spending a weekend to rest, they were walking on the banks of a river that was near the house, on the shore was a small boat, they to see closer the fish decided to ride in the boat and suddenly this moved. The current of the river took them to a small cave among the rocks, the current dragged them inside the cave as a kind of waterfall, when they passed this they found many flowers, gigantic trees very leafy, another world was very blue sky. In the boat they got a bird with a bowtie and I speak to them saying welcome to the country of wonders, they surprised they saw the faces but they were not afraid, they got off the boat, they arrived at a cabin full of sweets and food of all kinds , chocolates, sweets, everything was giant after a while they were surrounded by all kinds of animals: birds, rabbits. All with their bowtie and spoke among themselves. The bird told them to come will be a trip they will not forget.