Your level of Poetry is too damn high and especially your imagenation is above the standard. I am huge fan of Poetry and Poets and i have read lot of poetry Including Faiz Ahmed Faiz, Jaun Elia,N.M.Rashid, Allama Iqbal, Mohsin Navi ( All of these are very Big Names in Urdu Language).
Although English is not my Native Language but still i got it because you beautifully explained it through awesome Metaphors, Specifically this one is too awesome,
Particles on the ascent -
I - we - it - deluge of profundity
Indigo - convalescent - cinnabar - frownsmith
Colors of pollution in the aura froth madly in their
Obscure circuits - I am the cleansed, of the malady not mine.
It is very awesome platform that i am meeting alike minded people here and it would be great to share ideas with you, By the way I am a Teacher by Profession and its been almost 20 Days i joined this Platform.
Really Great to know about you and yes You are an awesome Poet as well :)
Keep writing and making us amuse @d-pend
Stay Blessed, Steem On!