Mine me, meld me [Day 98]

[d-pend]

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Mine me, meld me

Fill me, receive me, release me, instill me—
with waves of calm majesty, dignity, poise.
Heal me, repeal me, rescind me, unreel me—
until I feel nothing but echoes of joys.

I am resung in the chirp of dead midnight;
I am refound—
by arbiting Time.
I am rewound into coils and consonance,
I am restrung—
with laces of light.

Seal me, fix me, tear me, nix me;
cancel my crudeness and cause me to shine.
Steal me, lull me, woo me, mull me;
brew me in fullness and rawness of thine.

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Written by
@d-pend on 6/12/18
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1 — "Sunrise" by Steveoshaug
2 — "At Sunrise" by Hassan9
3 — "Sunrise in Bucovina" by Ancam131
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Comments

[munawar1235]

Awesome poetry @d-pend. Amazing lines:

cancel my crudeness and cause me to shine

[akkha]

Superb ! Great lines @d-pend !!

[violetmed]

Bravo Daniel! Love this one!

[liverussian]

Ummmm.... It isn't enough to say that enjoyed every sound of the piece!!!!! I was reading it outloud to feel the beauty of the repetiton of "ee" in the first stanza crowned with "echoes of joys"

Then all the "re-verbs" reinforced by the repetition of "I am" felt like resurrection:

I am resung in the chirp of dead midnight

like an old song that gets the soul of everyone who makes a cover of it. Daniel!!!!!!!! I'm, you know, emotional about this line. And then here again:

I am restrung—
with laces of light.

again a parallel with music, that can fill you entirely.

And the last stanza unlike the first one, which feels light, more like a release (haha, you even used this word), feels heavier, it's the contrary of release, it makes you stay, it affects you, changes you in a rude way, but it's needed to be released later.

This piece reads to me from the end to the beginning, I even tried to read it this way, starting from the last stanza: all the suffering through fixing leads to the release! Oh, Daniel!

[zeleiracordero]

Simply beautiful!

Heal me, repeal me, rescind me, unreel me—
until I feel nothing but echoes of joys.

[corderosiete]

Echoes of joy will listen to your ears. Open your soul and we will enter.

[shirosh]

Read me, feel me, comment me...... Hah ha.... Nice poetry @d-pend

[aminur87]

"Seal me, fix me, tear me, nix me;
cancel my crudeness and cause me to shine."
Awesome poetry. Very good. I appreciate your poetry. Thank you for share.

[mineopoly]

I'm very happy to read your poem @d-pend. I'm thankful to have a friend like you.

Tear drops of joy and repentance:

Seal me, fix me, tear me, nix me;
cancel my crudeness and cause me to shine

I'm pretty sure you've heard this song but just in case:

[cryptov]

heal me, get me inner peace! that was an awesome one @d-pend

[nonz]

Well penned.

[therebotelife]

Beautiful envirmant photo thank for sharing

[prydefoltz]

Well that was gorgeous. You've written a hymn. Huzzah:):):)

[mcsamm]

you did it again and different this time @d-pend

[tiempoyesp]

Me parece hermoso
I think it's beautiful

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[meyrale]

How beautiful ... but the images that you placed, make you fly ... Very beautiful the poem .... Thanks for the delight