Your effort and creaitivity is appreciated, like many other things writing too is an art that comes naturally to only selected people who must have inborn talent. You have a flair for it and seems to a good one to go through from the casual read. Would like to read in detail later.
But appreciate your creativity. One suggestion though, you could add one or two more suitable photos if it was available in pixabay kind of sites if seems to suitable.
Thanks you
Thank you and I hope you enjoy the story when you read it in more detail later.
More pictures would be nice, however I want the style to stay consistent by using the same artist, so I'm limited by money.