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I checked out your DLive and I appreciate our work.

Feedback-
Don't use back round music
Think and try different strategy to promote Steem

https://www.poweredbysearch.com/blog/psychology-of-marketing/

Also please note that I don't work for Dlive or anybody else and I'm an individual who invested my own hard earned money and time/energy to impact Steemians life positively.