DnW Poetry Contest #1: A Critical Beginning

This poetry is in line with @deeday31 & @kneelyrac 's contest.

I thank you both for hosting such a contest. This is indeed an avenue for amateurs like me to express our thoughts.

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The Beginning

to be born in the hands of poverty
is to be born in silence
you get to keep your identity
but you cannot be heard

is there an end to this social disability?
is there a new beginning of this darkness?
when hope arises, can i be saved by this indignity?
O these questions, I am glad I could bear

gone are the days of fatality
to look beyond the present
is to look beyond criticality
The key for a new beginning

the hands of poverty
that familiar word
no longer fits in me
for I am a new beginning

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weeee!!! lamat sa pg apil yok

You're welcome te deeday!!

Well done! Blessings for a new beginning and hope.

Thank you

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