If i may come with a (constructive) critic? The instrumental is quite intriguing, especially at the beginning for the few seconds. But then, it starts to become chaotic, in the sense that i hear 3 main lines (2 instrumental lines and the voice line) having their own rhythm, and trying to catch up one with eachother .
This type of trance - house music is what i mainly listen and im happy to see you want to go up that road. So i was thinking, maybe you consider in cutting the voice and maybe introducing a sound of trompet in low vollume and a steady beat to help harmonize the others, or a piano (synthesized) sound/s to have the purpose of keeping the other lines in check not to run by it's own . It would be a more cut/neat sound overall, and a more clear to take in musical piece .
What do you think ?
In all honesty, I rode a nice wave in the middle of working on this, and then got to one of those burnout point by the end of not wanting to look back for a while - so at this time, my head isn’t even there to consider what else could be adjusted - just another in vault, onto new projects...
Good to see you're appreciating the engagement ;) .