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I think it just needs trimming a little bit.

I want to make sure my point comes across well without it sounding like a rant or rambling haha.

That's true, check out this free course, it has been an eye opener for me for editing:
https://www.udemy.com/secret-sauce-of-great-writing/

Cool! Will have a look at that for sure.

How is your article doing? Eager to read it!

It's getting there! :-)

Hopefully It'll be posted it soon.

Here it is: https://steemit.com/freedom/@futuristgear/the-4-hour-work-week-is-nonsense-here-s-why

Should have been longer because I haven't covered everything.

But, I guess the rest can be turned into more articles. :-)