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RE: Devouring Jane - an erotic story (NSFW)

in #erotica6 years ago

This was really well done. I like the smooth transition from cautious observer to full on taking the dildo exhibitionist! I like that Jane was able to fully enjoy the experience and did so with grace. Part of that comes from the way you set up the scene as a supporting one built on consent and making her feel comfortable. This is a more realistic portrayal of the community than I have seen lately. Keep it up! (No pun intended)