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RE: An old man into his body - Freewrite - Short story

in #fiction4 years ago

So many great lines - this, e.g.,
This life that we are shelling like an eternal ear of corn and that is only an instant lived with the intensity we give it, fighting the cold with kisses, because there is so much to kiss" -- wow! Beautiful story with a killer final line!