How to break my heart in 50 words. Check.

Well said. He is good at that! Dang.

What a fabulous quick-shot of a story in so few words! Bravo!

I quite agree!

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Oh my, that is really heartbreaking, @damianjayclay. It is especially poignant that they were expecting what I assume are the military police. And they just waited until the inevitable happened, and the son watched as his father was dragged away. Well done.

Heart wrenching stuff... Great dialogue and scene setting my friend...

Good scene, impactful.