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RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 7) - The Hours Between 1100 and 1200 (Part 1 of 2)

in #fiction • 9 years ago

So i'm guessing this journey of "weeks" and "perpetual daylight" is all in a day yeah? 😃

It's amazing the way you represent all these. I'm hoping he didn't get too hurt from the beating he took.

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Actually, more like an hour ;) I really tried to illustrate how children tend to over-exaggerate simple situations. Like for example, if they don't go to some place or buy some thing, it feels like the end of the world for them :D Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts and for you continued support, my friend :D

As for the beating, be on the lookout for the SILVER LINING of this chapter for an in-depth explanation. I promise that it's going to be very meaty.