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RE: "Brand New" - An Original Novella Set in Manaia (Part II)

in #fiction5 years ago

Very good story. Solid plot (with all the references and hints at plot development), interesting characters, realistic dialogues.
This novella is very promising.
At some point I sensed a reference to Little red riding hood, only a boy was the one running the errand. I think in the context of this story it would be a very interesting development with the sophistication this story conveys.