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RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 23) - The Hours Between 0300 and 0400

in #fiction8 years ago

You know, that's a very interesting idea, and one that I thought of initially putting. I can't recall the reason why I chose not to though. Maybe because this was a serial, and the recap kind of removes some energy from the flow. I'm not sure. In any case, I wouldn't be able to do it now for the previous chapters as I'm unable to edit them. But yeah, will definitely consider your suggestion heavily for my next stories, for sure! Thanks for the advice, man :D