good story, Ian. Yes, I think you have talent - I'd need to see more stories to judge, but this one has a Stephen King feel to it. Your characters are believable, and you can write. Good work!
good story, Ian. Yes, I think you have talent - I'd need to see more stories to judge, but this one has a Stephen King feel to it. Your characters are believable, and you can write. Good work!
I appreciate it! I can't wait to bring some of my other stories over to this format.