wow, what a great narrative! Are you making a novel? I am not a literary critic but honestly it seems to me that your text is very clean, well narrated and with defined characters. I think I'm reading a chapter of a best sellers. I really loved reading you. It is not common to see such dense literary texts in steemit. I will try to find time to read the other chapters. Greetings to Mattias and you @cardforge
I actually have made two novels for a separate series. This serial is something new I wanted to try in a different format. I'm glad you liked it so much, there are many more chapters to come!