Nicely done! Very neat and engaging.
I like how you've instilled an air of both mystery and tension.
Good job!
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Nicely done! Very neat and engaging.
I like how you've instilled an air of both mystery and tension.
Good job!
Thank you very much @michelle.gent, coming from you that means a lot. I hope you'll enjoy it as the story continues to progress and I don't let you down.
You've got past the first hurdle, you can't edit a blank page ;)
Keep going!