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RE: Continuity (Original Fiction)

in #fiction3 years ago

JUST BECAUSE WE CAN, DOESN'T MEAN WE SHOULD. Clever sentence to end this story. I loved this story and I think you could "spice it up". And from the comments, I think I'm not the only one wanting more. The idea of reincarnation has always interested me, so I was left wondering what would happen if we had memories or revelations of our past lives. I have read that a child before the age of 5 can remember their other lives, but after that they lose spiritual memory. Anyway, I had already forgotten your narrative style and was more familiar with your poetic voice. Have a great night, my friend! Oh, by the way, thanks infinite for your support. Hugs and many blessings.

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Thank you! I think this last line is something humanity will be telling itself quite a bit in the near future (at least I hope so). I've heard that same thing about spiritual memory. It's very fascinating. This story is especially convincing but there's many more like this....

You're welcome for the votes! I'm glad you enjoyed this. Writing it has rekindled my desire to work on more fiction. I forgot how much fun it was to create these little alternate realities. Have a wonderful rest of your week!

I hope you are encouraged to continue writing fiction! You win and your readers win with those interesting stories. I'm already going to watch the video. Enjoy your weekend too. Hugs

I have a few more in the works! I really appreciate it, Nancy. I'm glad people are still interested in my work after all these years. Thanks!