Wow what an engrossing story. Really well writing as well, some parts could have flowed better but doesn't detract from the plot or the way it keeps the interest. Great work man!
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Thanks for reading! And yes I'm sure you're right, I guess this one still needs another pass, thanks for letting me know!
Well, I probably go too far in the other direction as the 10 random things post I made, I revised 23 times haha
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