I like your writing style. I particularly enjoyed the bit about the excessive focus on the apple. Really gave the character some depth.
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I like your writing style. I particularly enjoyed the bit about the excessive focus on the apple. Really gave the character some depth.
Thank you 💚
Following some advice, I'm trying to do "deeper" storytelling than I'm used to, with more focus on the protagonist's experiences.