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RE: Challenge #02633-G076: For Best Results

in #fiction6 years ago

Good lad Marvin! Quest roaring success XD

Also can you please make this one make sense for dumb people like me?

He had grown into adulthood and care of the education care of both her and Wraithvine

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I think I put too many cares in there. Should read:

"He had grown into and adulthood care of the education and care of both her and Wraithvine."

Yet another sideways sentence care of your internet Nutter. It will be fixed in the anthology.

XD

Think you may need a synonym for one of the cares when you do the anthology :D