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RE: Continuity (Original Fiction)

in #fiction3 years ago

The story is very interesting and full of emotions! You really managed to portray the bond between Linda and Jacob so beautifully, that it made me feel connected to their feelings. The twist at the end of the story gave a curious surprise and made me think further about the true meaning of "Continuity" and those eight mysterious words.

I really appreciate the flowing writing style and the detailed descriptions in the stories. You are able to explore the emotions of the characters well, so I can feel the warmth of their relationship and also the feeling of losing Linda when reading Jacob's notes.

This story really caught my attention and made me want to know what will happen next. I hope you will continue to write interesting stories like this one, because the talent for creating interesting fictional worlds is amazing! Thank you for sharing this captivating story!🙏🙏🙏

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Thanks for the kind words, so glad it held your attention!