Hi @celsius100. I apologize, as I read your story when you first submitted it but I somehow missed commenting and upvoting. (And it is past 7 days now!) This is a very intriguing story. I could see this turning into a longer suspense story.
You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
Thanks for commenting. I thought this was a good test for a start of a story, to capture the readers attention right away. I appreciate the kind words.