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RE: Fiftywords Prompt: Lost

in #fiftywords6 years ago

I really enjoyed this story, @esttyb. It was a fun surprise when it switched from being an observation of the young lady to advice for how she should find her own strength. I love this line:

The untouchable Queen

Nice work!

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Thanks so much @jayna. Your prompt inspires me to get better with my short stories write-ups.